Thursday, 30 May 2013

The Water Park

For this  poem I had to be very specific in my writing and also use 'show not tell'.
We also had to include at least 10 activated nouns .

Water Park

Feet hit the water,
with a huge splash.

Screams and squeals echo around,
students wait to be blasted into the sky.

Foam mat speeds us,
Down the water slide.

Wheels skid on the rough road,
as they are flying down the hill.

Kayaks swim harshly,
through the water.

Toes etch with,
sand between them.

Cameras capture,
the funny moment .

The cold  rushes,
up my spine.

Ducks dart across the sparkling water,
away from the kids.

By Josh M

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